Editing Thomas the Rhymer

{{Short description|13th-century Scottish laird and reputed prophet from Earlston}}
{{Distinguish|Thomas Rymer}}
{{Use British English|date=October 2013}}
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{{Infobox person
| name        = Thomas the Rhymer
| image       = Katherine Cameron-Thomas the Rhymer.png
| alt         = 
| caption     = From ''Thomas the Rhymer'' (retold by Mary MacGregor, 1908) "Under the Eildon tree Thomas met the lady," illustration by Katherine Cameron
| birth_name  = Thomas de Ercildoun
| birth_date  = c. 1220
| birth_place = [[Earlston|Erceldoune]] (Earlston), [[Berwickshire]], Scotland
| death_date  = c. 1298 (age about 78)
| death_place = 
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| nationality = Scottish
| children    = Thomas de Ercildounson
| other_names = True Thomas, Thomas Learmouth/Learmonth/Learmount/Learmont/Learmounth, Thomas Rhymer/Rymour/Rymer, Thomas de Erceldoune/Ercildoun, Thomas Rymour de Erceldoune
| occupation  = [[Laird]]
| known_for   = [[Prophecy]]
}}

Sir '''Thomas de Ercildoun''', better remembered as '''Thomas the Rhymer''' (fl. c. 1220&nbsp;– 1298<ref name="dnb">{{cite DNB|wstitle=Erceldoune, Thomas of|last=Tedder|first=Henry Richard|volume=17}}</ref>), also known as '''Thomas Learmont''' or '''True Thomas''', was a Scottish [[laird]] and reputed [[prophet]] from [[Earlston]] (then called "Erceldoune") in the [[Scottish Borders|Borders]].<ref>{{Harvnb|Chambers|1826|p=73}}; {{Harvnb|Chambers|1842|p=6}}</ref> Thomas' gift of prophecy is linked to his poetic ability.

He is often cited as the author of the English ''[[Sir Tristrem]]'', a version of the [[Tristan|Tristram]] legend, and some lines in [[Robert Mannyng]]'s ''[[Mannyng's Chronicle|Chronicle]]'' may be the source of this association. It is not clear if the name ''Rhymer'' was his actual surname or merely a sobriquet.<ref>{{Harvnb|Scott|1803|loc=''Minstrelsy'', '''II''', p.309}}. "Robert de Brunne" here is another name for Robert Mannyng. Scott goes on to quote another source from a manuscript in French, but Thomas of "Engleterre" is likely [[Thomas of Britain]].</ref>

In literature, he appears as the protagonist in the tale about Thomas the Rhymer carried off by the "[[Queen of Elphame|Queen of Elfland]]" and returned having gained the gift of prophecy, as well as the inability to tell a lie.  The tale survives in a medieval verse romance in five manuscripts, as well as in the popular [[ballad]] "'''Thomas Rhymer'''" ([[Child Ballad]] number 37).<ref name="child-rymer">Child Ballad #37. "Thomas the Rymer", {{Harvnb|Child|1884|loc=''Pop. Ball.'' '''I''', pp. 317–329}}</ref><ref name="child-add">{{Harvnb|Child|1892|loc=''Pop. Ball.'' '''IV''', p.454–5}}</ref> The romance occurs as "Thomas off Ersseldoune" in the [[Lincoln Thornton Manuscript]].{{sfn|Laing|Small|1885|pp=82–83, 142–165}}

The original romance (from c. 1400) was probably condensed into ballad form (c. 1700){{citation needed|date=April 2025}} though there are dissenting views on this{{whose?|date=April 2025}}. [[Walter Scott]] expanded the ballad into three parts, adding a sequel which incorporated the prophecies ascribed to Thomas, and an epilogue where Thomas is summoned back to Elfland after the appearance of a sign, in the form of the milk-white [[Hart (deer)|hart]] and [[wikt:hind#Noun|hind]].  Numerous prose retellings of the tale of Thomas the Rhymer have been undertaken, and included in fairy tale or folk-tale anthologies; these often incorporate the return to Fairyland episode that Scott reported to have learned from local legend.{{citation needed|date=April 2025}}

==Historical figure==
<!--Image file has been deleted [[File:The Eildon Hills, Walter Scott's favourite view. - geograph.org.uk - 671206.jpg|thumb|The Eildon Hills, where Thomas supposedly entered Elfland.]]-->
Sir Thomas was born in Erceldoune (also spelled ''Ercildoune''&nbsp;– now [[Earlston]]), [[Berwickshire]], sometime in the 13th century, and has a reputation as the author of many prophetic verses. Little is known for certain of his life but two charters from 1260 to 1280 and 1294 mention him, the latter referring to "Thomas de Ercildounson son and heir of Thome Rymour de Ercildoun".<ref name="autogenerated1">Francis James Child, ''The English and Scottish Popular Ballads'', v. 1, p. 317, Dover Publications, New York 1965</ref>

Thomas became known as "True Thomas", supposedly because he could not tell a lie. Popular lore recounts how he prophesied many great events in Scottish history,<ref name="autogenerated1" /> including the death of [[Alexander III of Scotland]].

Popular esteem of Thomas lived on for centuries after his death, and especially in Scotland, overtook the reputation of all rival prophets including [[Merlin (wizard)|Merlin]],{{sfn|Murray|1875|p=xxx}} whom the 16th century pamphleteer of ''[[The Complaynt of Scotland#Merlin|The Complaynt of Scotland]]'' denounced as the author of the prophecy (unity under one king) which the English used as justification for aggression against his countrymen.{{sfn|Murray|1875|p=xxx}} It became common for fabricated prophecies (or reworkings of earlier prophecies) to be attributed to Thomas to enhance their authority,{{sfn|Murray|1875|p=xxx}} as seen in collections of prophecies which were printed, the earliest surviving being a chapbook entitled "The Whole Prophecie of Scotland, England, etc." (1603).{{sfn|Murray|1875|p=xxx}}<ref>{{cite book |title=The Whole prophecie of Scotland, England, and some part of France and Denmark, prophesied by meruellous Merling, Beid, Berlington, Thomas Rymour, Waldhaue, Eltraine, Banester, and Sybilla, all according in one. Containing many strange and meruelous things.|place=Edinburgh |publisher=Robert Waldegraue |year=1603}} (Repr. Edinburgh: The Bannatyne Club 1833; Later edition: Edinburgh: Andro Hart, 1615)</ref>{{Refn|In ''The Whole Prophecie'' (1603), the first three sections are the prophecies of Merlin, [[Bede]], and [[John of Bridlington]] (analyzed in {{Harvnb|Murray|1875|pp=xxx–xl}}), followed by the prophecy of Thomas the Rhymour (printed in entirety in Appendix).<ref name="murray-apdxI">{{harvnb|Murray|1875|loc=Appendix I, p. 48–51}}</ref>}}

==Prophecies attributed to Thomas==
Descriptions and paraphrases of Thomas's prophecies were given by various Scottish historians of yore, though none of them quoted directly from Thomas.<ref>"His prophecies are alluded to by Barbour, by Wintoun, and by Henry, the minstrel, or ''Blind Harry''.. None of these authors, however, give the words of any of the Rhymer's vaticinations" {{Harv|Scott|1803|loc=''Minstresy'' '''II''', pp. 281–2}}</ref><ref group="lower-alpha">Scott undertook creative exercise of writing in verse of his own what Thomas's prophecy might have been: "Thomas the Rhymer: Part Second" by {{Harvnb|Scott|1803|loc=''Minstresy'' '''II''', pp. 303–307}}. Scott prefaced his creation with copious notes to fend off "the more severe antiquaries".</ref>

*''"On the morrow, afore noon, shall blow the greatest wind that ever was heard before in Scotland."''<ref>This particular rendition from Latin into English can be found in, e.g.:{{cite book|last=Watson|first=Jean L. |title=The history and scenery of Fife and Kinross|publisher=Andrew Elliot|year=1875|url=https://books.google.com/books?id=x8UHAAAAQAAJ&pg=PA74}}</ref>
::This prophecy predicted the death of [[Alexander III of Scotland|Alexander III]] in 1286. Thomas gave this prediction to the [[Patrick III, Earl of Dunbar|Earl of Dunbar]], but when there was no change in weather patterns discernible at the ninth hour, the Earl sent for the prophet to be reproved. Thomas replied the appointed hour has not come, and shortly thereafter, the news came reporting of the king's death.

::The earliest notice of this prophecy occurs in [[Walter Bower|Bower]]'s 15th-century ''[[Scotichronicon]]'', written in Latin.{{sfn|Murray|1875|p=xiii}}<ref group="lower-alpha">Bower, ''[[Scotichronicon]]'' Book X, Ch. 43: "...qua ante horam explicite duodecimam audietur tam vehemens ventus in Scotia, quod a magnis retroactis temporibus consimilis minime inveniebatur." (footnoted in {{Harvnb|Murray|1875|pp=xiii-}})</ref> An early English vernacular source is [[John Bellenden]]'s 16th century ''Croniklis of Scotland,'' a translation of [[Hector Boece]].{{sfn|Murray|1875|p=xiii}}

*''"Who shal rule the ile of Bretaine / From the North to the South sey?"''
:''"A French wife shal beare the Son, / Shall rule all Bretaine to the sey,''
:''that of the Bruces blood shall come / As neere as the nint degree."''{{Refn|''Whole Prophecie'', "The Prophecie of Thomas Rymour" vv.239–244<ref name="murray-apdxI"/>}}
::The lines given are structured in the form of one man's questions, answered by another, who goes on to identify himself: "In Erlingstoun, I dwelle at hame/Thomas Rymour men calles me."{{Refn|vv. 247-8<ref name="murray-apdxI"/>}}

::Printed in the aforementioned chapbook ''The Whole Prophecie'' of 1603, published upon the death of [[Elizabeth I]], the prophecy purports to have presaged Scottish rule of all of Britain by [[James VI and I|James I]], whose mother [[Mary, Queen of Scots|Mary Stewart]], had been raised in [[Mary of Guise|her own mother's]] native [[Kingdom of France|France]] and was briefly their Queen Consort during her first childless marriage to [[Francis II of France|Francis II]].<ref>{{citation|last=Cooper|first=Helen|title=Literary reformations of the Middle Ages|editor-last=Galloway|editor-first=Andrew |work=The Cambridge Companion to Medieval English Culture|publisher=Cambridge University Press|year=2011|pages=261–|isbn=9780521856898|url=https://books.google.com/books?id=_j5ZOBuUiGwC&pg=PA261\ISBN}}</ref>

::This "became in the sequel by far the most famous of all the prophecies,"<ref>{{Harvnb|Murray|1875|pp=xxxiv}}</ref> but it has been argued that this is a rehash of an earlier prophecy that was originally meant for [[John Stewart, Duke of Albany]] (d. 1536),<ref>{{Harvnb|Murray|1875|p=xxxiv}}, citing [[David Dalrymple, Lord Hailes|Lord Hailes]], ''Remarks on the History of Scotland'' (1773), [https://books.google.com/books?id=6bM9AAAAcAAJ&pg=89 Chapter III, pp.89–]</ref> whose mother was [[La Tour d'Auvergne|Anna de la Tour d'Auvergne]], daughter of the [[Count of Auvergne]]. Words not substantially different are also given in the same printed book, under the preceding section for the prophecy of [[John of Bridlington]],<ref>"How euer it happen for to fall, / The Lyon shal be Lord of all./The French wife shal beare the sonne, /Shal welde al Bretane to the sea, And from the Bruce's blood shall come. /As near as the ninth degree." ({{Harvnb|Murray|1875|p=xxxvi}})</ref> and the additional date clue there "1513 & thrise three there after" facilitating the identification "Duke's son" in question as Duke of Albany, although Murray noted that the Duke's "performance of ... doubty deeds" was something he "utterly failed to do".{{sfn|Murray|1875|p=xxxv}}

===Popular folkloric prophecies===
[[Walter Scott]] was familiar with rhymes purported to be the Rhymer's prophecies in the local popular tradition, and published several of them.<ref>{{harvnb|Scott|1803}}, ''Minstrelsy'' '''II''', pp. 300–, "sundry rhymes, passing for his prophetic effusions, are still current among the vulgar"</ref> Later [[Robert Chambers (publisher born 1802)|Robert Chambers]] printed additional collected rhyme prophecies ascribed to Thomas, in ''Popular Rhymes'' (1826).

*''"At Eildon Tree, if yon shall be,''
:''a brig ower Tweed yon there may see."''{{sfn|Scott|1803|loc=''Minstrelsy'' '''II''', pp. 301–}}
::Scott identifies the tree as that on [[Eildon Hill]] in [[Melrose, Scotland|Melrose]], some five miles away from today's Earlston.{{sfn|Scott|1803|loc=''Minstrelsy'' '''II''', p. 343}} Three bridges built across the river were visible from that vantage point in Scott's day.

*''"This Thorn-Tree, as lang as it stands,''
:''Earlstoun sall possess a' her lands."''{{sfn|Chambers|1826|pp=78–79}}
::or "As long as the Thorn Tree stands / Ercildourne shall keep its lands".<ref name="wilson017">{{Harvnb|Wilson|1954|p=17}}</ref> This was first of several prophecies attributed to the Rhymer collected by Chambers, who identified the tree in question as one that fell in a storm in either 1814<ref name="murray-thorn"/> or 1821,{{sfn|Chambers|1826|pp=78–79}} presumably on the about the last remaining acre belonging to the town of [[Earlston|Earlstoun]]. The prophecy was lent additional weight at the time, because as it so happened, the merchants of the town had fallen under bankruptcy by a series of "unfortunate circumstances".<!--ref name="chambers1826-079"/-->{{sfn|Chambers|1826|p=79}} According to one account, "Rhymer's thorn" was a huge tree growing in the garden of the Black Bull Inn, whose proprietor, named Thin, had its roots cut all around, leaving it vulnerable to the storm that same year.<ref name="murray-thorn">{{Harvnb|Murray|1875|pp=xlix, lxxxv}}. Murray received detailed report on the tree from Mr James Wood, Galashiels.</ref>

*''"When the Yowes o' Gowrie come to land, ''
:''The Day o' Judgment's near at hand"''{{sfn|Chambers|1826|p=96}}
::The "Ewes of Gowrie" are two boulders near [[Invergowrie]] protruding from the [[Firth of Tay]], said to approach the land at the rate of an inch a year. This couplet was also published by Chambers, though filed under a different locality ([[Perthshire]]), and he ventured to guess that the ancient prophecy was "perhaps by Thomas the Rhymer."{{sfn|Chambers|1826|p=96}} [[Barbara Ker Wilson]]'s retold version has altered the rhyme, including the name of the rocks thus: "When the Cows o' Gowrie come to land / The Judgement Day is near at hand."<ref name="wilson017"/>

*''"[[York]] was, London is, and [[Edinburgh|Edinbruch]] 'ill be,''
:''the biggest and the bonniest o' a' the three"''{{sfn|Chambers|1826|p=81}}<ref>Modernized as: "York was, London is, and Edinburgh shall be / The biggest and bonniest o' the three", {{Harvnb|Wilson|1954|p=17}}</ref>
::Collected from a 72-year-old man resident in Edinburgh.{{sfn|Chambers|1826|p=96}}

The Weeping Stones Curse:
*''"[[Fyvie]], Fyvie thou'se never thrive,''
:''[[wikt:long|lang]]'s there's in thee [[wikt:stone|stanes]] three :''
:''There's [[wikt:one|ane]] intill the highest tower,''
:''There's ane intill the ladye's bower,''
:''There's ane aneath the water-[[wikt:gate|yett]], ''
:''And thir three stanes ye'se never get."''{{sfn|Chambers|1842|p=8}}<ref name="welfare">Modern variant "Fyvie, Fyvie thou'll never thrive / As long as there's in thee stones three;/There's one in the oldest tower,/There's one in the lady's bower/There's one in the water-gate,/And these three stones you'll never get." in: {{cite book|last1=Welfare|first1=Simon|others=John Fairley|title=Cabinet of Curiosities|publisher=St. Martin's Press| place=New York|year=1991|page=88|isbn=0312069197}}</ref>
::Tradition in [[Aberdeenshire]] said that Fyvie Castle stood seven years awaiting arrival of "True Tammas," as the Rhymer was called in the local dialect. The Rhymer arrived carrying a storm that brewed all around him, though perfectly calm around his person, and pronounced the above curse. Two of the stones were found, but the third stone of the water-gate eluded discovery.<!--ref name="chambers1842-008"/-->{{sfn|Chambers|1826|p=8}} And since 1885 no eldest son has lived to succeed his father.<ref name="welfare"/>

*''"Betide, betide, whate'er betide,''
:''Haig shall be Haig of Bemerside.''{{sfn|Scott|1803|loc=''Minstrelsy'' '''II''', p. 301}}
::This prophesied the ancient family of the Haigs of Bemerside will survive for perpetuity. Chambers, in a later editions his ''Popular Rhymes'' (1867) prematurely reported that "the prophecy has come to a sad end, for the Haigs of Bemerside have died out."{{sfn|Murray|1875|p=xliv}}{{sfn|Chambers|1870|p=296}} In fact, [[Field Marshal]] [[Douglas Haig, 1st Earl Haig|Douglas Haig]] hails from this family,<ref>{{cite journal|last=Benet|first=W. C.|title=Sir Douglas Haig|journal=The Caledonian|volume=19|number=1|date=April 1919|url=https://books.google.com/books?id=A-ARAAAAYAAJ&pg=PA12|pages=12–14}}</ref> and was created [[Earl Haig|earl]] in 1919, currently succeeded by the 3rd Earl (b. 1961).

==Ballad==
<!--UNATTRIBUTABLE assertion: "Musicologists have traced the ballad, "Thomas the Rhymer", back at least as far as the 13th century"-->
The ballad ([[Roud]] 219) around the legend of Thomas was catalogued [[List of the Child Ballads|Child Ballad]] #37 "Thomas the Rymer," by [[Francis James Child]] in 1883. Child published three versions, which he labelled A, B and C, but later appended two more variants in Volume 4 of his collection of ballads, published in 1892.<ref name="child-add"/> Some scholars refer to these as Child's D and E versions.<ref>{{Harvnb|Lyle|2007|p=10}}</ref> Version A, which is a Mrs Brown's recitation, and C, which is Walter Scott's reworking of it, were together classed as the Brown group by C.E. Nelson, while versions B, D, E are all considered by Nelson to be descendants of an archetype that reduced the romance into ballad form in about 1700, and classed as the 'Greenwood group'. (See §[[#Ballad sources|Ballad sources]]).

Child provided a critical synopsis comparing versions A, B, C in his original publication, and considerations of the D, E versions have been added below.

===Ballad synopsis===
The brief outline of the ballad is that while Thomas is lying outdoors on a slope by a tree in the Erceldoune neighborhood, the queen of Elfland appears to him riding upon a horse and beckons him to come away. When he consents, she shows him three marvels: the road to Heaven, the road to Hell, and the road to her own world (which they follow). After seven years, Thomas is brought back into the mortal realm. Asking for a token by which to remember the queen, he is offered the choice of having powers of harpistry, or else of prophecy, and of these he chooses the latter.

[[File:Scott-Minstrelsy-Works-v1-p195-True Thomas tune.jpg|thumb|Music score to the ballad of "True Thomas", from Scott's ''Minstrelsy''.]]
The scene of Thomas's encounter with the elf-queen is "Huntly Bank" and the "Eildon Tree" (versions B, C, and E){{sfn|Child|1884|loc=''Pop. Ball.'' '''I''', 320}}{{sfn|Child|1892|loc=''Pop. Ball.'' '''IV''', pp. 454–5}} or  "Farnalie" (version D)<ref group="lower-alpha">Or at least "Farnalie" is given as the spot to where the queen returned Thomas in the final stanza of the D version. {{Harvnb|Child|1892|loc=''Pop. Ball.'' '''IV''', pp. 454–5}}</ref> All these refer to the area of [[Eildon Hill]]s, in the vicinity of [[Earlston]]: Huntly Bank was a slope on the hill and the tree stood there also, as Scott explained:{{sfn|Scott|1803|loc=''Minstrelsy'' '''II''', p. 343}}<ref>"Huntley Bank, a place on the descent of the Eildon Hills," {{cite book |last=Scott |first=Walter |title=Letters on Demonology and Witchcraft |publisher=G. Routledge and sons |year=1887 |url=https://books.google.com/books?id=KpILAAAAIAAJ&pg=PA112 |page=112}}</ref> Emily B. Lyle was able to localize "farnalie" there as well.<ref>She identified it with ''farnileie'' on the Eildon Hills, which appears in a document of 1208 about a land dispute "between the monasteries of Melrose and Kelso". Scott had failed to make this identification. ({{Harvnb|Lyle|1969|p=66}}; repr. {{Harvnb|Lyle|2007|p=12}})</ref>

The queen wears a skirt of grass-green silk and a velvet mantle, and is mounted either on a milk-white steed (in Ballad A), or on a dapple-gray horse (B, D, E and R (the Romance)). The horse has nine and fifty bells on each ''[[wikt:tett#Scots|tett]]'' (Scots English. "lock of matted hair"<ref>Tait (sometimes written ''tate'' and ''tett''), a lock of matted hair. [https://books.google.com/books?id=zLACAAAAIAAJ&pg=PA226 Mackay's Dictionary] (1888); Tate, tait, teat, tatte 2. "Lock, applied to hair" [https://archive.org/details/jamiesonsdictio01johngoog/page/n618 <!-- pg=549 --> John Jamieson's Dictionary] (Abridged, 1867).</ref>) on its mane in A, nine hung on its mane in E, and three bells on either side of the bridle in R, whereas she had nine bells in her hand in D, offered as a prize for his harping and [[wikt:carp|carping]] (music and storytelling).

Thomas mistakenly addresses her as the "Queen of Heaven" (i.e. the [[Virgin Mary]]{{sfnp|Child|1892|loc=''Pop. Ball.'' '''I''', p. 319}}), which she corrects by identifying herself as "Queen of fair Elfland" (A, C). In other variants, she reticently identifies herself only as "lady of an [[wikt:unco#Scots|unco]] land" (B), or "lady gay" (E), much like the medieval romance. But since the unnamed land of the queen is approached by a path leading neither to Heaven nor Hell, etc., it can be assumed to be "Fairyland," to put it in more modern terminology.<ref name="murray-fairy">{{Harvnb|Murray|1875|p=xxiii}}</ref>

In C and E, the queen dares Thomas to kiss her lips, a corruption of Thomas's embrace in the romance that is lacking in A and B though crucial to a cogent plot, since "it is contact with the fairy that gives her the power to carry her paramour off" according to Child. Absent in the ballads also is the motif of the queen losing her beauty ([[Loathly lady]] motif): Child considered that the "ballad is no worse, and the romance would have been much better" without it, "impressive" though it may be, since it did not belong in his opinion to the "proper and original story," which he thought was a blithe tale like that of [[Ogier the Dane]] and [[Morgan le Fay|Morgan le fay]].<ref>{{Harvnb|Child|1884|loc=''Pop. Ball.'' '''I''', p. 320ab, and note §}}</ref> If he chooses to go with her, Thomas is warned he will be unable to return for seven years (A, B, D, E). In the romance the queen's warning is "only for a twelvemonth",<ref>{{Harvnb |Child|1884|loc=''Pop. Ball.'' '''I''', p. 320b}}</ref> but he overstays by more than three (or seven) years.

Then she wheels around her milk-white steed and lets Thomas ride on the {{linktext|crupper}} behind (A, C), or she rides the dapple-gray while he runs (B, E). He must wade knee-high through a river (B, C, E), exaggerated as an expanse of blood (perhaps "river of blood"), in A.{{sfn|Child|1884|loc=''Pop. Ball.'' '''I''', p. 321b}} They reach a "garden green," and Thomas wants to pluck a fruit to slake his hunger but the queen interrupts, admonishing him that he will be accursed or damned (A, B, D, E). The language in B suggests this is "the [[Forbidden fruit|fruit of the Forbidden Tree]]",<ref>{{Harvnb|Child|1884|loc=''Pop. Ball.'' '''I''', 321a, note *}}</ref> and variants D, E call it an apple. The queen provides Thomas with food to sate his hunger.

The queen now tells Thomas to lay his head to rest on her knee (A, B, C), and shows him three marvels ("[[wikt:ferly|ferlies]] three"), which are the road to Hell, the road to Heaven, and the road to her homeland (named Elfland in A). It is the road beyond the meadow or lawn overgrown with lilies<ref>Leven, "a lawn, an open space between woods"; Lily leven "a lawn overspread with lilies or flowers" [https://books.google.com/books?id=y_s3AQAAIAAJ&pg=PA327 John Jamieson's Dict.] (Abridged, 1867)</ref> that leads to Heaven, except in C where the looks deceive and the lily road leads to Hell, while the thorny road leads to Heaven.

The queen instructs Thomas not to speak to others in Elfland, and to allow her to do all the talking. In the end, he receives as present "a coat of the even cloth, and a pair of shoes of velvet green" (A) or "tongue that can never lie" (B) or both (C). Version E uniquely mentions the Queen's fear that Thomas may be chosen as "[[wikt:teind|teinding]] unto hell",<ref name="child-add"/> that is to say, the {{linktext|tithe}} in the form of humans that Elfland is obliged to pay periodically. In the romance, the Queen explains that the collection of the "fee to hell" draws near, and Thomas must be sent back to earth to spare him from that peril. (See § [[#Literary criticism|Literary criticism]] for further literary analysis.)

===Ballad sources===
The ballad was first printed by [[Walter Scott]] (1803), and then by [[Robert Jamieson (antiquary)|Robert Jamieson]] (1806).<ref>{{Harvnb|Scott|1803|loc=''Minstrelsy'' '''II''', pp. 269–273}}: "Part 1, Ancient" which is prefaced "never before published"</ref><ref>{{Harvnb|Jamieson|1806|loc=Vol. '''II''', pp. 7–10}}: "procured in Scotland... before [he] knew that he was likely to be anticipated in its publication by Mr Scott" (p.7)</ref><ref>Jamieson and Scott's printed in parallel in {{Harvnb|Murray|1875|pp=liii–}}</ref> Both used Mrs Brown's manuscript as the underlying source. Child A is represented by Mrs Brown's MS and Jamieson's published version (with only slight differences in wording). Child C is a composite of Mrs Brown's and another version.<ref>{{Harvnb|Child|1884|loc=''Pop. Ball.'' '''I''', p. 317a}} "C being compounded of A and another version..."</ref> In fact, 13 of the 20 stanzas are the same as A, and although Scott claims his version is from a "copy, obtained from a lady residing not far from Ercildoun" corrected using Mrs Brown's MS,<ref name="Scott 1803 loc=Minstrelsy II, p. 268">{{Harvnb|Scott|1803|loc=''Minstrelsy'' '''II''', p. 268}}</ref> Nelson labels the seven different stanzas as something that is "for most part Scott's own, Gothic-romantic invention".<ref name="nelson140">{{Harvnb|Nelson|1966|p=140}}</ref>

Child B is taken from the second volume of the Campbell manuscripts entitled "Old Scottish Songs, Collected in the Counties of Berwick, Roxburgh, Selkirk & Peebles", dating to ca. 1830.<ref name="child-add"/>{{Refn|Nelson adds "at Marchomont House, Berwickshire.{{sfn|Nelson|1966|p=142}}}} The Leyden transcript, or Child "D" was supplied to Walter Scott before his publication, and influenced his composition of the C version to some degree.{{sfn|Nelson|1966|p=142}} The text by Mrs Christiana Greenwood, or Child "E" was "sent to Scott in May of 1806 after reading his C version in the ''Minstrelsey'',{{sfn|Nelson|1966|p=142}} and was dated by Nelson as an "early to mid-eighteenth-century text".{{sfn|Nelson|1966|p=143}} These two versions were provided to Scott and were among his papers at [[Abbotsford House|Abbotsford]].

====Mrs Brown's ballads====
Mrs Brown, also known as [[Anna Gordon (ballad collector)|Anna Gordon]] or Mrs Brown of Falkland (1747–1810),<ref name="bronson"/><ref name="rieuwerts"/> who was both Scott's and Jamieson's source, maintained that she had heard them sung to her as a child.<ref name="anderson-ltr"/> She had learned to sing a repertoire of some three dozen ballads from her aunt, Mrs Farquheson.<ref group="lower-alpha">who learned them at the estate of her husband called Allan-a-quoich, by the waterfall of [[Linn of Quoich|Linn a Quoich]], near the source of the [[River Dee, Aberdeenshire|River Dee]] in [[Braemar]], [[Aberdeenshire]]</ref><ref name="bronson">{{cite journal|last=Bronson|first=Bertrand H.|title=Mrs. Brown and the Ballad|journal=California Folklore Quarterly|volume=4|number=2|year=1945|pages=129–140 |doi=10.2307/1495675|jstor=149567}}</ref><ref name="perry">{{cite encyclopedia |last=Perry |first=Ruth |title=Artistic Representation: The Famous Ballads of Anna Gordon, Mrs Brown |encyclopedia=A Cultural History of Women in the Age of Enlightenment |editor-last=Pollak |editor-first=Ellen |volume=4 |series=Cultural Histories |publisher=Bloomsbury |year=2012 |pages=187–208 |hdl=1721.1/69940 |url=http://dspace.mit.edu/handle/1721.1/69940 |doi=10.5040/9781350048157-ch-008 |isbn=978-1-3500-4815-7}}</ref><ref name="rieuwerts">{{cite book|last=Rieuwerts|first=Sigrid|title=The Ballad Repertoire of Anna Gordon, Mrs Brown of Falkland|publisher=Scottish Text Society|year=2011|isbn=978-1897976326}}; [http://scholarworks.iu.edu/journals/index.php/jfrr/article/view/3018/2894 Reviewed by Julie Henigan] in ''Journal of Folklore Research Reviews'' and [http://www.thefreelibrary.com/The+Ballad+Repertoire+of+Anna+Gordon,+Mrs+Brown+of+Falkland.-a0274956908 by David Atkinson] in ''Folk Music Journal'' (23 Dec 2011)</ref> Mrs Brown's nephew Robert Eden Scott transcribed the music, and the manuscript was available to Scott and others.<ref name="rieuwerts"/><ref>Quoting from letter from Thomas Gordon: "In conversation I mentioned them to your Father [i.e. William Tytler], at whose request my Grandson Mr Scott, wrote down a parcel of them as his aunt sung them. Being then but a meer novice in musick, he added in his copy such musical notes as he supposed..."; and later: "The manuscript that was being passed around among Anderson, Percy, Scott, and Jamieson had been penned by Anna Brown's nephew, Robert Scott, who took down the words and music to the ballads as his aunt sung them at William Tytler's request in 1783."{{Harvnb|Perry|2012|pp=10–12}}</ref> However different accounts have been given, such as "an old maid-servant who had been long as the nursemaid being the one to teach Mrs Brown."<ref>{{Harvnb|Murray|1875|pp=liii}}</ref>

===Walter Scott's ballads in three parts===
In ''Minstrelsy'', Walter Scott published a second part to the ballad out of Thomas's prophecies, and yet a third part describing Thomas's return to Elfland. The third part was based on the legend with which Scott claimed to be familiar, telling that "while Thomas was making merry with his friends in the Tower of Ercildoune," there came news that "a hart and hind... was parading the street of the village." Hearing this, Thomas got up and left, never to be seen again, leaving a popular belief that he had gone to Fairyland but was "one day expected to revisit earth".<ref name="Scott 1803 loc=Minstrelsy II, p. 268"/> Murray cites [[Robert Chambers (publisher born 1802)|Robert Chambers]]'s suspicion that this may have been a mangled portrayal of a living local personage, and gives his own less marvellous traditional account of Thomas's disappearance, as he had received it from an informant.{{sfn|Murray|1875|pp=lxix–l}}

In Walter Scott's "Third Part" to the ballad, Thomas finds himself in possession of a "elfin harp he won" in Fairyland in a minstrel competition. This is a departure both from the traditional ballad and from the medieval romance, in which the queen tells Thomas to choose whether "to harpe or carpe," that is, to make a choice either of the gift of music or of the gift of speech. The "hart and hind" is now being sung as being "white as snow on Fairnalie" (Farnalie has been properly identified by Lyle, as discussed above). Some prose retellings incorporate some features derived from this third part (See §[[#Retellings|Retellings]]).

=== Duncan Williamson ===
The traditional singer [[Duncan Williamson]], a [[Scottish Gypsy and Traveller groups|Scottish traveller]] who learned his songs from his family and fellow travellers, had a traditional version of the ballad which he was recorded singing on several occasions. One recording (and discussion of the song) can be heard on the [[Tobar an Dualchais – Kist o Riches|Tobar an Dualchais]] website.<ref>{{Cite web|title=Tobar an Dualchais Kist O Riches|url=http://www.tobarandualchais.co.uk/track/39395?l=en|access-date=2021-03-12|website=tobarandualchais.co.uk}}</ref>

==Medieval romance==
<!---The 14th century romance "Thomas of Erceldoune", with accompanying prophecies,-->
The surviving medieval romance is a lengthier account which agrees with the content of the ballad.<ref>Richard Utz, "Medieval Philology and Nationalism: The British and German Editors of ''Thomas of Erceldoune''," ''Florilegium: Journal of the Canadian Society of Medievalists'' 23.2 (2006), 27–45.</ref>

The romance opens in the first person (migrating to the third),<ref group="lower-alpha">— or, to be more precise: "The narrative begins in the first person, but changes to the third, lapsing once for a moment into the first" {{Harv |Burnham |1908 |p=377}}</ref> but probably is not genuinely Thomas's own work. Murray dated the authorship to "shortly after 1400, or about a hundred years after Thomas's death",<ref name="murray-fairy"/> but more recent researchers set the date earlier, to the (late) 14th century. The romance often alludes to "the story," as if there had been a preceding recension, and [[Francis James Child|Child]] supposed that the "older story," if any such thing actually existed, "must be the work of Thomas".<ref>"als the story sayes" v.83 or "als the storye tellis" v. 123, {{Harvnb|Child|1884 |loc=''Pop. Ball.'' '''I''', 318b}}</ref>

As in ballad C, Huntley banks is the locale where Thomas made sighting of the elfin lady. The "Eldoune, Eldone tree (Thornton, I, 80, 84)" is also mentioned as in the ballad. Thomas is captivated by her, addressing her as queen of heaven, and she answers she is not so lofty, but hints she is of fairy kind. Thomas propositions her, but she warns him off saying that the slightest sin will undo her beauty. Thomas is undaunted, so she gives the "Mane of Molde" (i.e. Man of Earth; mortal man) (I, 117) consent to marry her and to accompany her.

"Seven tymes by hyr he lay," (I, 124), but she transforms into a hideous [[hag]] immediately after lying with him, and declares he shall not see "[[wikt:middle-earth|Medill-erthe]]" (I,160) for a twelvemonth ("twelmoneth", "xij Mones" vv.152, 159). As in the ballad, the lady points out one way towards heaven and another towards hell during their journey to her dominion (ca.200–220). The lady is followed by greyhounds and "raches" (i.e. scent dogs) (249–50). On arrival, Thomas is entertained with food and dancing, but then the lady tells him he must leave. To Thomas, his sojourn seems to last for only three days, but the lady tells him that three years ("thre ȝere"), or seven years ("seuen ȝere"), have passed (284–6) (the manuscripts vary), and he is brought back to the Elidon tree.

Fytte II is mostly devoted to prophecies. In the opening, Thomas asks for a token by which to remember the queen, and she offers him the choice of becoming a harper or a prophet ("harpe or carpe"). Rather than the "instrumental" gift, Thomas opts for the "vocal (rather ''oral'') accomplishments."{{sfn|Murray|1875|p=xlvii}} Thomas asks her to abide a bit and tell him some ''ferlys'' (marvels). She now starts to tell of future battles at Halidon Hill, Bannockburn, etc., which are easily identifiable historic engagements. (These are tabulated by Murray in his introduction.)

The prophecies of battles continue into Fytte III, but the language becomes symbolic. Near the end Thomas asks why [[Black Agnes]] of [[Dunbar]] (III, 660) imprisoned him, and she predicts her death. This mention of Black Agnes is an anachronism, Thomas of Erceldoune having lived a whole generation before her, and she was presumably confused with an earlier Countess of the March.{{sfn|Murray|1875|p=lxxxi}}

===Manuscript sources===
The medieval romance survives complete or in fragments in five manuscripts, the earliest of which is the Lincoln codex compiled by [[Robert Thornton (scribe)|Robert Thornton]]:{{sfn|Murray|1875|pp=lvi–lxi}}
* [[Lincoln Thornton Manuscript|Thornton MS.]] (olim. Lincoln A., 1. 17) – ca. 1430–1440.{{sfn|Laing|Small|1885|pp=82–83, 142–165}}
* MS. Cambridge Ff. 5, 48 – mid 15th century.
* MS. Cotton Vitellius E. x., – late 15th century.
* MS. Landsowne 762 – ca. 1524–30
* MS. Sloane 2578 MSS.  – 1547. Lacks first fitt.
All these texts were edited in parallel by [[James Murray (lexicographer)|J. A. H. Murray]] in ''The Romance and Prophecies of Thomas of Erceldoune'' (1875).<ref>{{Harvnb |Murray |1875}}</ref>

The Cotton MS. gives an "[[Incipit]] prophecia Thome Arseldon" and an "[[wikt:explicit|Explicit]] prophetia thome de Arseldoune",<ref>{{harvnb|Murray|1875|pp=2, 47}}</ref> thus this was the version that Walter Scott excerpted as Appendix. The Sloane MS. begins the second fytte with: "Heare begynethe þe ij<sup>d</sup> fytt I saye / of S''ir'' thom''as'' of Arseldon,"{{sfn|Murray|1875|p=18}} and the Thornton MS. gives the "[[wikt:explicit|Explicit]] Thomas of Erseldowne" after the 700th line.{{sfn|Murray|1875|p=46}}

===Relationship between romance and ballad forms===
The romance dates from the late 14th to the early 15th century (see [[#Medieval romance|below]]), while the ballad texts available do not antedate ca. 1700–1750 at the earliest.{{Refn|name="child-balladdate"|{{Harvnb |Child|1884 |loc=''Pop. Ball.'' '''I''', 320a}}, "the earliest version (A) can be traced at furthest only into the first half of the last century. Child's comment in volume 1 did not include the Greenwood text he appendixed in Vol. IV, but Nelson has assigned the same 1700–1750 period ("early to mid-eighteenth-century text") for the Greenwood text.{{sfn|Nelson|1966|p=143}}  Cooper prefers to push it back to a "text whose origins can be traced back to before 1700"<ref name="cooper2005-172">{{Harvnb |Cooper |2005 |p=172 and n5}}</ref>}} While some people believe that the romance gave rise to the ballads (in their existing forms) at a relatively late date, this view is not uncontroversial.

[[Walter Scott]] stated that the romance was "the undoubted original", the ballad versions having been corrupted "with changes by oral tradition".<ref>{{Harvnb|Scott|1803|loc=''Minstrelsy'' '''II''', pp. 274-}}. This commentary comes under Scott's "Appendix to the Thomas the Rhymer", where he prints an excerpt from the romance (the version with an Incipit, i.e. the Cotton MS, as spelled out by Murray in his catalog of "Printed Editions", {{Harvnb|Murray|1875|p=lxi}})</ref> Murray flatly dismisses this inference of oral transmission, characterizing the ballad as a modernization by a contemporary versifier.<ref>Scott goes on to say it was "as if the older tale had been regularly and systematically modernized by a poet of the present day", {{Harv|Scott|1803|loc=''Minstrelsy'' '''II''', p. 274}}, and Murray, seizing on this statement, comments that "the 'as if' in the last sentence might be safely left out, and that the 'traditional ballad' never grew 'by oral tradition' out of the older, is clear...", {{Harvnb|Murray|1875|p=liii}}</ref> Privately, Scott also held his "suspicion of modern manufacture."<ref name="anderson-ltr">Letter of [[Robert Anderson (editor and biographer)|Robert Anderson]], who compiled ''The Works of the British Poets'', to [[Thomas Percy (bishop of Dromore)|Bishop Percy]], {{Harv|Murray|1875 |p=liii n1}}, taken from Nicholl's ''Illustrations of Literature'', p.89</ref>{{Refn|name="henigan-RSJC"|"Dismissed by Ritson as new-fangled and by Scott as inauthentic, Mrs Brown's ballads were considered exemplary by both Robert Jamieson and, later, Francis James Child, who gave her variants pride of place in The English and Scottish Popular Ballads" in Henigan's review of Rieuwerts' book.<ref name="rieuwerts"/>}}

C. E. Nelson argued for a common archetype (from which all the ballads derive), composed around the year 1700 by "a literate individual of antiquarian bent" living in [[Berwickshire]].{{sfn|Nelson|1966|p=147}} Nelson starts off with a working assumption that the archetype ballad, "a not too remote ancestor of [Mrs] Greenwood['s version]" was "purposefully reduced from the romance".{{sfn|Nelson|1966|p=143}} What made his argument convincing was his observation that the romance was actually "printed as late as the seventeenth century"{{sfn|Nelson|1966|p=143}} (a printing of 1652 existed, republished {{Harvnb |Albrecht |1954}}), a fact missed by several commentators and not noticed in Murray's "Published Texts" section.

The localization of the archetype to Berwickshire is natural because the Greenwood group of ballads (which closely abide by the romance) belong to this area,{{sfn|Nelson|1966|pp=142–143}} and because this was the native place of the traditionary hero, Thomas of Erceldoune.{{sfn|Nelson|1966|p=143}} Having made his examination, Nelson declared that his assumptions were justified by evidence, deciding in favour of the "eighteenth-century origin and the subsequent tradition of [the ballad of] 'Thomas Rhymer'",{{sfn|Nelson|1966|p=147}} a conclusion applicable not only to the Greenwood group of ballads but also to the Brown group. This view is followed by [[Katharine Mary Briggs]]'s folk-tale dictionary of 1971,{{Refn |"The various forms of the ballad of True Thomas all seem to be based on the medieval romance, 'Thomas of Ercidoun'"<ref name="briggs"/>}} and David Fowler.<ref>{{citation |last=Fowler |first=David C. |title=Rymes of Robin Hood |editor-last=Knight |editor-first=Stephen Thomas |editor-link=Stephen Thomas Knight |work=Robin Hood: An Anthology of Scholarship and Criticism |pages=73–4 |publisher=Boydell & Brewer Ltd |year=1999 |isbn=0859915255 |url= https://books.google.com/books?id=69bYyY9xiKYC&pg=PA74}}</ref>

From the opposite point of view, Child thought that the ballad "must be of considerable age", even though the earliest available to him was datable only to ca. 1700–1750.<ref name="child-balladdate"/> E. B. Lyle, who has published extensively on Thomas the Rhymer,<ref>{{Harvnb |Utz |2006}} surveys post-1950s scholarship on Thomas.</ref> presents the hypothesis that the ballad had once existed in a very early form upon which the romance was based as its source.<ref>{{cite journal |last=Lyle |first=E. B. |title=The Relationship between Thomas the Rhymer and Thomas of Erceldoune |journal=Leeds Studies in English |volume=NS 4 |year=1970 |pages=23–30|url=https://archive.org/details/lse-1970-whole-issue}}</ref> One supporter of this view is [[Helen Cooper (literary scholar)|Helen Cooper]] who remarks that the ballad "has one of the strongest claims to medieval origins";<ref>{{citation |last=Cooper |first=Helen |title= Thomas of Erceldoune: Romance as Prophecy |pages=171– |editor-last= Saunders |editor-first=Corinne J. |work= Cultural Encounters in the Romance of Medieval England |publisher=DS Brewer |year=2005 |type=preview |url= https://books.google.com/books?id=xGtdAIU0uEwC&pg=PA172 |isbn=0191530271}}</ref><ref>{{cite book |last=Cooper |first=Helen |title= The English Romance in Time : Transforming Motifs from Geoffrey of Monmouth the Death of Shakespeare |publisher=Oxford University Press |year=2004 |format=preview |url=https://books.google.com/books?id=WjfkLVXWNy4C&pg=PA467 |isbn=0191530271}}, p.467 n17: "[Lyle's paper] suggests that an early form of the ballad may underlie the romance."</ref> another is [[Richard Firth Green]] who has provided strong evidence for his contention that "continuous oral transmission is the only credible explanation," by showing that one detail in the medieval romance, omitted from the seventeenth-century print, is preserved in the Greenwood version.<ref>{{citation |last=Green |first=Richard Firth |title=The Ballad and the Middle Ages |editor-last=Gray |editor-first=Douglas |editor2-last=Cooper |editor2-first=Helen |editor-last3=Mapstone |editor-first3=Sally |work=The Long Fifteenth Century: Essays for Douglas Gray |publisher=Oxford University Press |year=1997 |page=168}}</ref><ref>Green, Richard Firth (2021). "'Thomas Rymer' and Oral Tradition," Notes and Queries, 68, 4.</ref>

===Literary criticism===
<!--The theme of this song also closely relates to another song, that of [[Tam Lin]], which follows the same general topical lines. Its more general theme relates to temptation and mortal pleasures.-->

In the romance, the queen declares that Thomas has stayed three years but can remain no longer, because "the foul fiend of Hell will come among the (fairy) folk and fetch his fee" (modernized from Thornton text, vv.289–290). This "fee" "refers to the common belief that the fairies "paid kane" to hell, by the sacrifice of one or more individuals to the devil every seventh year."<!--ref name="murray-lxxxi"/--> (The word teind is actually used in the Greenwood variant of Thomas the Rymer: "Ilka seven year, Thomas, / We pay our teindings unto hell, ... I fear, Thomas, it will be yerself".<ref name="child-add"/>) The situation is akin to the one presented to the title character of "[[Tam Lin]]" who is in the company of the Queen of Fairies, but says he fears he will be given up as the [[tithe]] ({{Langx|sco|[[teind]]}} or kane) paid to hell.<!--ref name="child-1-339a"-->{{sfn|Child |1884 |loc=''Pop. Ball.'' '''I''', p.339a}} The common [[Motif-Index of Folk-Literature|motif]] has been identified as type F.257 "Tribute taken from fairies by fiend at stated periods"<ref name="briggs">{{cite book |last=Briggs |first=Katherine M. |title=A Dictionary of British Folk-Tales in the English Language Part B: Folk Legends}}</ref> except that while Tam Lin must devise his own rescue, in the case of the Rymer, "the kindly queen of the fairies will not allow Thomas of Erceldoune to be exposed to this peril, and hurries him back to earth the day before the fiend comes for his due".{{sfn|Child |1884 |loc=''Pop. Ball.'' '''I''', p.339a}} [[J. R. R. Tolkien]] also alludes to the "Devil's tithe" as concerns the Rhymer's tale in a passing witty remark<ref>Tolkien refers to this as follows: "The road to fairyland is not the road to Heaven; nor even to Hell, I believe, though some have held that it may lead thither indirectly by the Devil's tithe," and subsequently quoting stanzas of the ballad "Thomas Rymer" beginning ""O see you not yon narrow road/" (text from {{Harvnb |Jamieson |1806 |p=9}}). In essay "On Fairy Stories" (orig. pub. 1947), reprinted in p.98 of {{citation |last=Tolkien |first=J.R.R. |title=Tree and Leaf (On Fairy-Stories) |work=A Tolkien Miscellany |publisher=SFBC |year=2002 |orig-year=1947 |pages=97–145 |format=doc |url=http://www.excelsiorclassical.org/wp-content/uploads/2011/04/Tolkien_On-Fairy-Stories.doc |url-status=dead |archive-url=https://web.archive.org/web/20150402132942/http://www.excelsiorclassical.org/wp-content/uploads/2011/04/Tolkien_On-Fairy-Stories.doc |archive-date=2 April 2015 }}</ref>

====Influences====
It has been suggested that [[John Keats]]'s poem ''[[La Belle Dame sans Merci]]'' borrows motif and structure from the legend of Thomas the Rhymer.<ref>{{cite book |last=Stewart |first=Susan |title=Poetry and the Fate of the Senses |publisher=University of Chicago Press |year=2002 |isbn=0226774139 |page=126 |url= https://books.google.com/books?id=xL4jr8ZkPVYC&pg=PA126}}</ref>

[[Washington Irving]], while visiting Walter Scott, was told the legend of Thomas the Rhymer,<ref>{{cite book |last=Irving |first=Washington |title=The Crayon Miscellany |publisher=G.P. Putnam |year=1861 |pages=238–240 |url= https://books.google.com/books?id=538RAAAAYAAJ&pg=238}}</ref> and it became one of the sources for Irving's short story ''[[Rip van Winkle]]''.<ref>{{cite book |last=Myers |first=Andrew B. |title=A Century of commentary on the works of Washington Irving, 1860–1974 |publisher=Sleepy Hollow Restorations |year=1976 |page=[https://archive.org/details/centuryofcomment00myer/page/462 462] |isbn=9780912882284 |format=snippet |url= https://archive.org/details/centuryofcomment00myer|url-access=registration }}</ref><ref>{{cite book |last=Humphrey |first=Richard |title=Scott: Waverley |publisher=Cambridge University Press |year=1993 |page=23 |isbn=9780521378888 |url= https://books.google.com/books?id=7DA4AAAAIAAJ&pg=PA23}}</ref>

==Adaptations==

===Retellings===
There have been numerous prose retelling of the ballad or legend.

John Tillotson's version (1863) with "magic harp he had won in Elfland" and Elizabeth W. Greierson's version (1906) with "harp that was fashioned in Fairyland" are couple of examples that incorporate the theme from Scott's Part Three of Thomas vanishing back to Elfland after the sighting of a hart and hind in town.<ref>{{citation|last=Tillotson|first=John|author-link=John Tillotson|title=Thomas the Rhymer|work=The Boy's Yearly Book: being the twelve numbers of the "Boy's Penny Magazine"|publisher=S. O. Beeton|year=1863|url=https://books.google.com/books?id=rycGAAAAQAAJ&pg=PA192}}</ref><ref>{{citation|last=Grierson|first=Elizabeth Wilson|others=Stewart, Allan, 1865-1951, illus.|title=Thomas the Rhymer|work=Tales from Scottish Ballads|publisher=A. & C. Black|year=1930|orig-year=1906|pages=195–213|url=https://archive.org/details/talesfromscottis28424gut/}} [http://www.gutenberg.org/ebooks/28424 Project Gutenberg] (''Children's Tales from Scottish Ballads'' 1906)</ref>

Barbara Ker Wilson's retold tale of "Thomas the Rhymer" is a patchwork of all the traditions accrued around Thomas, including ballad and prophecies both written and popularly held.<ref>{{citation|last=Wilson|first=Barbara Ker|title=Thomas the Rhymer|work=Scottish Folk-tales and Legends|publisher=Oxford University Press|year=1954}}; Repr. {{citation|last=Wilson|first=Barbara Ker|title=Thomas the Rhymer|work=Fairy Tales from Scotland (Retold by)|publisher=Oxford University Press|year=1999|orig-year=1954|url=https://books.google.com/books?id=Z4kDhSpGahwC&pg=PA8|pages=8–17|isbn=0192750127}}</ref>

Additional, non-exhaustive list of retellings as follows:

* Donald Alexander Macleod (ed.), [[Arthur George Walker]] (illus.)  "Story of Thomas the Rhymer" (ca. 1880s).<ref>{{citation|last=Macleod|first=Donald Alexander|others=Walker, A. G. (Arthur George 1861-1939), illus.; Dowden, Edward, intro.|title=XII. Story of Thomas the Rhymer|work=A Book of Ballad Stories|place=London|publisher=Wells, Gardner, Darton|year=1906|pages=94–107|url=https://books.google.com/books?id=jS8PAAAAQAAJ&pg=PA94}} (original printing: New York : F.A. Stokes Company, [188-?])</ref>
* Gibbings & Co., publishers (1889).<ref>{{citation|author=anonymous|title=Thomas the Rhymer|work=Scottish Fairy Tales, Folklore, and Legends|place=London|publisher=W. W. Gibbings & Co.|year=1889|pages=93–97|url=https://books.google.com/books?id=w4gvAAAAYAAJ&pg=PA93}}</ref><ref>Reprinted:{{citation|author=anonymous|others=Strahan, Geoffrey, illus.|title=Thomas the Rhymer|work=Scottish Fairy Tales, Folklore, and Legends|place=London|publisher=Gibbings & Co.|year=1902|pages=93–97|url=https://books.google.com/books?id=dgxLAAAAYAAJ&pg=PA93}}. Also cf. the first tale "Canobie Dick and Thomas of Ercildoun"</ref>
* Mary MacGregor (ed.), Katharine Cameron (illus.) (1908).<ref>{{cite book|last= MacGregor|first=Mary|others=Cameron, Katharine (1874–1965), illus.|title=Stories from the Ballads Told to the Children|place=London|publisher=T. C. & E. C. Jack |year=1908|url=http://www.gutenberg.org/files/22175/22175-h/22175-h.htm}}</ref>
* Donald Alexander Mackenzie (ed.), [[John Duncan (painter)|John Duncan]] (illus.), "Story of Thomas the Rhymer" (1917).<ref>{{citation|last=Mackenzie|first=Donald Alexander|others=Duncan, John, illus.|title=XII. Story of Thomas the Rhymer|work=Wonder Tales from Scottish Myth and Legend|place=New York|publisher=Frederick A Stoke|year=1917|pages=147–160}}</ref>
* George Douglas (ed.), James Torrance (illus.), in ''Scottish Fairy Tales'' (sans date, ca. 1920).<ref>{{citation|last=Douglas|first=George|others=Torrance, James, illus.|title=XII. Story of Thomas the Rhymer|work=Scottish Fairy Tales|place=New York|publisher=W. Scott Pub. Co.|year=c. 1920|oclc=34702026}}</ref>
* Judy Paterson (ed.), Sally J. Collins (illus.) (1998).<ref>{{cite book|last=Paterson|first=Judy|others=Collins, Sally J., illus.|title=Thomas the Rhymer, retold by|publisher=The Amaising Publishing House Ltd |year=1998|isbn=1871512603}}</ref>
* In [[Cencrastus]], Issue 79, Winter 2004–05, Donald Smith published a "new narrative adaptation of Ercildoun's version which is much superior to Scott's" that runs to 31 stanzas.

===Musical adaptations===
* The German version of ''Tom der Reimer'' by [[Theodor Fontane]] was set as a song for male voice and piano by [[Johann Carl Gottfried Loewe|Carl Loewe]], his op. 135.
** An outstanding early recording, in German is by [[Heinrich Schlusnus]], on Polydor 67212, of 1938 (78 rpm).
* Modern versions of the "Thomas the Rhymer" ballad include renditions by [[British folk rock]] act [[Steeleye Span]] which recorded two different versions for their 1974 album ''[[Now We Are Six (album)|Now We Are Six]]'' and another for ''[[Present--The Very Best of Steeleye Span]]'', released in 2002. Singer [[Ewan MacColl]] has also recorded his version of the ballad.
* The English composer [[Ralph Vaughan Williams]] left an opera by the title of ''Thomas the Rhymer'' incomplete at the time of his death in 1958. The libretto was a collaboration between the composer and his second wife, [[Ursula Vaughan Williams]], and it was based upon the ballads of ''Thomas the Rhymer'' and ''Tam Lin''.<ref>Ursula Vaughan Williams, ''R.V.W.: A Biography of Ralph Vaughan Williams'' (Oxford University Press, 1964), p. 393.</ref>
* The British country/[[acid house]] band [[Alabama 3]] drew upon the ballad of ''Thomas the Rhymer'' in a 2003 recording entitled ''Yellow Rose''.  Alabama 3's lyrics give the ballad a new setting in the American frontier of the 19th Century, where an enchanting woman lures the narrator to a night of wild debauchery, then robs and finally murders him.  ''Yellow Rose'' appears on their 2003 album ''[[Power in the Blood (Alabama 3 album)|Power in the Blood]]'' (One Little Indian / Geffen).
* Kray Van Kirk's Creative Commons-licensed song "The Queen of Elfland", for which Van Kirk also created a music video, retells the story in a modern setting.<ref>{{Citation | last = Van Kirk | first = Kray | title = The Queen of Elfland, Lyrics | url = http://www.krayvankirk.com/lyric/The%20Queen%20of%20Elfland.html | access-date = 27 December 2014 | url-status = dead | archive-url = https://archive.today/20141227213848/http://www.krayvankirk.com/lyric/The%20Queen%20of%20Elfland.html | archive-date = 27 December 2014 }}</ref><ref>{{Citation | last = Van Kirk | first = Kray | title = The Queen of Elfland, music video | url=http://www.krayvankirk.com  | access-date = 23 October 2015 }}</ref>

===Thomas in literature and theatre===
* [[Rudyard Kipling]]'s poem "The Last Rhyme of True Thomas" (1894) features Thomas Learmounth and a king who's going to make Thomas his knight.
* [[John Douglas Geddie|John Geddie]], ''Thomas the Rymour and his Rhymes''. [With a portrait of the author], Edinburgh: Printed for the Rymour Club and issued from John Knox's House, 1920.
* In [[William Croft Dickinson]]'s children book ''The Eildon Tree'' (1944), two modern children meeting Thomas the Rhymer and travel back in time to a critical point in Scottish history.
* Thomas is one of the main characters of [[Alexander Reid (playwright)|Alexander Reid]]'s play ''The Lass wi the Muckle Mou'' (1950).
* [[Nigel Tranter]], Scottish writer authored the novel ''[[Historical novels by Nigel Tranter set before 1286#True Thomas|True Thomas]]'' (1981).
* [[Ellen Kushner]]'s novel ''[[Thomas the Rhymer (novel)|Thomas the Rhymer]]'' (1990).
* Bruce Glassco's short story "True Thomas", in [[Ellen Datlow]] and [[Terri Windling]]'s anthology ''[[Black Swan, White Raven]]'' (1997). Like the other stories presented there, the Glassco story put a new spin on the legend. 
* ''Erceldoune'', a novella by [[Richard Leigh (author)|Richard Leigh]] (co-author of ''[[Holy Blood, Holy Grail]]''), features a folk-singer named Thomas "Rafe" Erlston. The novella appeared in the collection [https://books.google.com/books?id=pE1dnq70TkQC&pg=PA1 ''Erceldoune & Other Stories''] (2006) {{ISBN|978-1-4116-9943-4}}
* In [[Sergey Lukyanenko]]'s fantasy novel ''[[Last Watch (Lukyanenko novel)|The Last Watch]]'', Thomas is described as having survived until today and currently occupies the post of the Head of the Scottish Night Watch.
* Thomas appears in [[John Leyland]]'s ballad "Lord Soulis". Here, after failing to bind [[William II de Soules]] with magical ropes of sand, he determines that the sorcerer must be wrapped in lead and boiled.<ref>{{cite web |url=http://literaryballadarchive.com/PDF/Leyden_4_Lord_Soulis_f.pdf |title=Lord Soulis |author=John Leyden |work=British Literary Ballads Archive |access-date=8 April 2014}}</ref><ref name=br>{{cite web |url=http://www.britainexpress.com/scotland/castles/hermitage-castle.htm |title=Hermitage Castle |author=David Ross |work=Britain Express |access-date=3 April 2014}}</ref>
* Thomas the Rhymer is a major character in Andrew James Greig's novel ''One Is One'', (2018),<ref>{{cite book|first=Andrew James|last=Greig|title=One Is One|year=2018|publisher=Independently published |isbn=978-1983122088}}</ref> where Thomas is a man lost to himself and to time as he roams Scotland in the present day.
* Fantasy writer [[Diana Wynne Jones]]' [[Young adult fiction|young adult]] novel ''[[Fire and Hemlock]]'' draws from the ballad in a story set in the present day.
* [[Patricia Wrede|Patricia C. Wrede]]'s novel ''Snow White and Rose Red'' (1989), an adaptation of the [[Snow-White and Rose-Red|fairy tale of the same name]], casts the bear-prince and his brother as the Queen of Faerie's sons by Thomas Learmont, and a condensed version of his legend is given as backstory; the brother uses the surname "Rimer" in his dealings with mortals.

===Representations in fine art===
* ''Thomas the Rhymer and the Queen of Faerie'' (1851), by [[Joseph Noel Paton]] illustrated the ballad. A print reproduction by  [https://www.britishmuseum.org/system_pages/beta_collection_introduction/beta_collection_object_details.aspx?objectId=3092982&partId=1&searchText=fairy&images=true&page=1 Thomas the Rhymer and the Queen of Faerie] by John Le Conte was published W & A K Johnston (1852),. 
* Beverly Nichols' ''A Book of Old Ballads'' (1934) reprinted the Greenwood version of the ballad, with a print of "Thomas the Rhymer" by [[H. M. Brock]]<ref>{{cite book|last= Nichols|first=Beverley|others= Brock, H. M. (Henry Matthew), 1875–1960, illus.|title=A Book of Old Ballads|place=London|publisher=Hutchingson & co., ltd. |year=1934}}{{Gutenberg|no=7535|name=A Book of Old Ballads}}</ref>

==See also==
* "[[Tam Lin]]", another [[List of Child Ballads|Child Ballad]] with fairyland abduction theme
* [[Queen of Elphame|Queen of Elfland]]
* [[Mikhail Lermontov]], a Russian poet who, according to family legend, was a descendant of Thomas Learmont as [[Lermontov (Russian nobility)]]<ref>{{cite book|last1=Powelstock|first1=David|title=Becoming Mikhail Lermontov: The Ironies of Romantic Individualism in Nicholas I's Russia|date=2011|publisher=Northwestern University Press|isbn=978-0810127883|url=https://books.google.com/books?id=T-Ol2Ds20UQC&q=Mikhail+Lermontov+tarkhany |page=27}}</ref>

==Footnotes==

===Explanatory notes===
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===Citations===
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==References==
* {{DNB|prescript=|wstitle=Erceldoune, Thomas of|last=Tedder|first=Henry Richard|volume=17}}
* {{Cite EB1911|wstitle=Thomas of Erceldoune}}
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; Texts
* {{cite wikisource |title=The Whole Prophecies of Scotland, England, Ireland, France & Denmark |wslink=https://en.wikisource.org/wiki/The_Whole_Prophecies_of_Scotland,_England,_Ireland,_France_%26_Denmark |year= 1806|publisher=J. and M. Robertson |location=Glasgow|pages=48 pp }}
* {{cite book|last=Albrecht|first=William Price |title=The loathly lady in "Thomas of Erceldoune"; with a text of the poem printed in 1652|publisher=University of New Mexico Press|year=1954|lccn=55062031|series=University of New Mexico publications in language and literature; no. 11.}}
** — "A seventeenth-century text of Thomas of Erceldoune" (1954), ''Medium Ævum'' 23
* {{cite book|last=Chambers|first=Robert|author-link=Robert Chambers (publisher born 1802)|title=The Popular Rhymes of Scotland|publisher=W. Hunter|year=1826|isbn=9780807822623|url=https://books.google.com/books?id=R0PXAAAAMAAJ}}
** {{cite book|last=Chambers|first=Robert|title=Popular Rhymes, Fireside Stories, and Amusements of Scotland|publisher=William and Robert Chambers|year=1842|url=https://books.google.com/books?id=NQxMAAAAcAAJ}} [http://www.presscom.co.uk/chambers/chambers_popular.html]
** {{cite book|last=Chambers|first=Robert|title=The Popular rhymes of Scotland: New Edition |publisher=W. & R. Chambers|year=1870|url=https://archive.org/details/popularrhymessc01chamgoog|page=[https://archive.org/details/popularrhymessc01chamgoog/page/n302 296]}}
* {{cite book|last=Child|first=Francis James|chapter=37. Thomas Rymer|title=The English and Scottish Popular Ballads|volume=I <!--Part 2-->|publisher=Houghton Mifflin|year=1884|chapter-url=https://books.google.com/books?id=m9IVAAAAYAAJ&pg=PA317|pages=317–329}}
* {{cite book|last=Child|first=Francis James|chapter=37. Thomas Rymer|title=The English and Scottish Popular Ballads|volume=IV <!--Part 8-->|publisher=Houghton Mifflin|year=1892|chapter-url=https://books.google.com/books?id=htMVAAAAYAAJ&pg=PA454|pages=454–5}}
* {{cite book|last=Jamieson|first=Robert|title=Popular Ballads and Songs: From Tradition|volume=2|publisher=A. Constable and Company|year=1806|url=https://books.google.com/books?id=E9AOAAAAIAAJ&pg=PA3|pages=3–43}}: "True Thomas and Queen of Elfland"
* {{cite book|editor-last=Laing|editor-first=David|editor2-last=Small|editor2-first=John|chapter=Thomas off Ersseldoune|title=Select remains of the ancient popular poetry of Scotland|publisher=W. Blackwood and Sons|year=1885|chapter-url=https://books.google.com/books?id=2PQVAAAAYAAJ&pg=PA142 |pages=82–83, 142–165}}
* {{cite book|editor-last=Murray|editor-first=James A. H.|title=The Romance and Prophecies of Thomas of Erceldoune: printed from five manuscripts; with illustrations from the prophetic literature of the 15th and 16th centuries|place=London|publisher=Trübner|year=1875|series=EETS O.S.|volume=61|url=https://books.google.com/books?id=GFEJAAAAQAAJ}}
* {{cite book|last=Scott|first=Walter|title=Minstrelsy of the Scottish Border|publisher=James Ballantyne|volume=II|year=1803|url=https://books.google.com/books?id=gQwUAAAAQAAJ&pg=PA262|pages=262–321}}: "Thomas the Rhymer in Three Parts"

; Studies
* {{cite journal|last=Burnham|first=Josephine M.|title=A Study of Thomas of Erceldoune|journal=PMLA|volume=23|year=1908|issue=3|url=https://archive.org/details/publications23modeuoft\|pages=375–|doi=10.2307/456793|jstor=456793|s2cid=163171545 }}
* {{cite book|last=Lakowski|first=Romuald I.|chapter='Perilously Fair': Titania, Galdriel, and the Fairy Queen of Medieval Romance|editor-last=Croft|editor-first= Janet Brennan|title=Tolkien and Shakespeare: Essays on Shared Themes and Language|publisher=McFarland|year=2007|pages=60–78|chapter-url=https://books.google.com/books?id=-WGaDtnHUOYC&pg=PA60|isbn=9780786428274}}
* {{cite thesis|last=Lyle|first=Emily|type=Ph.D.|title=A Study of 'Thomas the Rhymer' and 'Tam Lin' in Literature and Tradition|publisher=University of Leeds|year=1967}}
* {{cite journal|last=Lyle|first=Emily|title=A Reconsideration of the Place-Names in 'Thomas the Rhymer'|journal=Scottish Studies|volume=13|year=1969|pages=65–71}}
* {{cite book|last=Lyle|first=E. B.|title=Fairies and Folk: Approaches to the Scottish Ballad Tradition |publisher=Wissenschaftlicher Verlag Trier|year=2007|page=10|format=snippet|url=https://books.google.com/books?id=cW7YAAAAMAAJ|isbn=978-3884769577}}
* {{cite journal|last=Nelson|first=C. E.|title=The Origin and Tradition of the Ballad of 'Thomas Rhymer'|journal=New Voices in American Studies|publisher=Purdue University Press|year=1966|url=https://books.google.com/books?id=5LjnVa0mzc8C&pg=PA138|pages=138–|isbn=0911198105}}
* {{cite journal|last=Utz|first=Richard|title=Medieval Philology and Nationalism: The British and German Editors of Thomas of Erceldoune|journal=Florilegium|volume=23|number=2|pages=27–45|date=2006|url=//journals.hil.unb.ca/index.php/flor/article/download/12546/20004}}
* ''[[Dictionary of National Biography]]''
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== External links ==
* {{Wikisource inline|The English and Scottish Popular Ballads/Part 2/Chapter 37}}

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